Montag, 21. April 2008
Aufsatz schreiben - lerne vom Besten
http://www.trinitysem.edu/Student/LessonInstruction/Composition.html
Beurteilungskriterien
Critères de la grille de correction à l’écrit (Société GRICS, 1995)
1. Élaboration du texte le texte respecte l’intention d’écriture, le sujet et le
lecteur
2. ordre des informations le texte est structuré de façon cohérente
3. présentation selon la
forme
la présentation est adaptée à la forme du texte
4. nombre de phrases le nombre de phrases au total
5. nombre de
subordonnées
le nombre de phrases comportant au moins une
subordonnée
6. nombre d’adjectifs et
d’adverbes
le nombre d’adjectifs, d’adverbes et de locutions
adverbiales
7. nombre de mots le nombre de mots dans le texte
8. liens entre les phrases les liens entre les phrases sont appropriés
9. Ponctuation les phrases sont ponctuées adéquatement
10. Structure des phrases les phrases sont bien construites
11 orthographe d’usage les mots usuels sont écrits correctement
12. accord en genre et en les déterminants, les noms, les adjectifs, les participes
8 Dans
1. Élaboration du texte le texte respecte l’intention d’écriture, le sujet et le
lecteur
2. ordre des informations le texte est structuré de façon cohérente
3. présentation selon la
forme
la présentation est adaptée à la forme du texte
4. nombre de phrases le nombre de phrases au total
5. nombre de
subordonnées
le nombre de phrases comportant au moins une
subordonnée
6. nombre d’adjectifs et
d’adverbes
le nombre d’adjectifs, d’adverbes et de locutions
adverbiales
7. nombre de mots le nombre de mots dans le texte
8. liens entre les phrases les liens entre les phrases sont appropriés
9. Ponctuation les phrases sont ponctuées adéquatement
10. Structure des phrases les phrases sont bien construites
11 orthographe d’usage les mots usuels sont écrits correctement
12. accord en genre et en les déterminants, les noms, les adjectifs, les participes
8 Dans
Montag, 14. April 2008
Sonntag, 6. April 2008
Fragen 5 -
5. Today's technology can offer many specialized solutions dependent on the type of the handicap.Wheel chairs are aquipped by batteries.
(Diese Dinge mit Orthosurgery... weiß ich nicht wie ich es ausformulieren soll!! bitte helfen)
6. Advantages are the availability of 24 hours professional care and service. Also there is a company of similarly disabled persons.
Disadvantages are the danger of isolation. Also it costst a lot of money. An other big problem is the potential disintegration from society.
7. I want to answer these question with a personal experience. A relative of mine stood in front of the decision to abort an embryo that was diagnosed as a down- syndrom baby. Her religious belief gave her the strengh to give birth to a handicapped baby and since then she gasped a lot of opportunities to socializ with mothers suffering from a similar fate.
8. In my opinion a disabled girl or boy couln't attend our school because we cannot provide what is needed for a handicapped person.
9. The majority of our towns, shops and railways is not providing a stepless acces.
10. We have recently been on school excursion to the Wagner Jauregg hospital in Linz and there cruelties where explained to us.
Bitte um Korrektur. Ein Stückchen weiter unten, wo ich den Blog "A day of a blind gril" angelegt habe, habe ich bereits angefangen etwas zu schreiben. Da bitte auch ein Auge drüber werfen!
Dankeschön
(Diese Dinge mit Orthosurgery... weiß ich nicht wie ich es ausformulieren soll!! bitte helfen)
6. Advantages are the availability of 24 hours professional care and service. Also there is a company of similarly disabled persons.
Disadvantages are the danger of isolation. Also it costst a lot of money. An other big problem is the potential disintegration from society.
7. I want to answer these question with a personal experience. A relative of mine stood in front of the decision to abort an embryo that was diagnosed as a down- syndrom baby. Her religious belief gave her the strengh to give birth to a handicapped baby and since then she gasped a lot of opportunities to socializ with mothers suffering from a similar fate.
8. In my opinion a disabled girl or boy couln't attend our school because we cannot provide what is needed for a handicapped person.
9. The majority of our towns, shops and railways is not providing a stepless acces.
10. We have recently been on school excursion to the Wagner Jauregg hospital in Linz and there cruelties where explained to us.
Bitte um Korrektur. Ein Stückchen weiter unten, wo ich den Blog "A day of a blind gril" angelegt habe, habe ich bereits angefangen etwas zu schreiben. Da bitte auch ein Auge drüber werfen!
Dankeschön
Samstag, 5. April 2008
Verbesserung v. Conny's Entwurf
1) Whenever "so- called" normal people meet or just observe handicapped people they may feel disgusted and these “normal” people refuse to communicate with the disabled humans.
2) There are two options to handle the problem of integration: On one hand practitioners claim its is almost impossible to integrate severely disabled people into groups of 20 to 25 kids. (This is also my private opinion). The second opinion that is mostly shared by the parents of handicapped kids is to integrate those at almost all means but to help to overcome those handicaps through a teaching assistant or technical carers. A well-known fact is: the earlier integration starts the easier the disabled person gets accustomed to it.
3) I can contribute a daily personal experience when driving by bus to my school. A blind girl is rarely helped by other pupils. I offer her my seat whenever I meet her. But there are also people who don't help her at all and observe her with neglect.
4) The biggest problem is self acceptance of a handicap. Thus the disabled persons often suffer from inferiority complexes. The environment in Vöcklabruck is not yet ready to give special understanding and support that would urgently needed.
2) There are two options to handle the problem of integration: On one hand practitioners claim its is almost impossible to integrate severely disabled people into groups of 20 to 25 kids. (This is also my private opinion). The second opinion that is mostly shared by the parents of handicapped kids is to integrate those at almost all means but to help to overcome those handicaps through a teaching assistant or technical carers. A well-known fact is: the earlier integration starts the easier the disabled person gets accustomed to it.
3) I can contribute a daily personal experience when driving by bus to my school. A blind girl is rarely helped by other pupils. I offer her my seat whenever I meet her. But there are also people who don't help her at all and observe her with neglect.
4) The biggest problem is self acceptance of a handicap. Thus the disabled persons often suffer from inferiority complexes. The environment in Vöcklabruck is not yet ready to give special understanding and support that would urgently needed.
Handicapped people(Zusammenfassung Fragen)
1) Whenever "so- called" normal people observe handicapped people they often feel disgusted and refuse to communicate with them.
2)There are two options. On the one hand there is my own opinion insted of practicice in a kindergarden. The second opinion is to integrate handicapps but help to overcome their handicap through a teching assistant or technical. Fact is that the earlier integration starts the easier the disabled get accustomed to it.
3.) I can contribute a daily personal experience when driving by bus to my school. A blind girl is rarely helped by other pupils. I offer her my seat whenever I meet her. But there are also people who don't help her.
4.) The biggest problem is self acceptance of a handicap. The enviroment is not ready to give special understanding and support that would urgently needed.
Bitte diesen Absatz korrigieren.Das sind die ersten 4 Fragen die wir gestern ausgearbeitet haben.
2)There are two options. On the one hand there is my own opinion insted of practicice in a kindergarden. The second opinion is to integrate handicapps but help to overcome their handicap through a teching assistant or technical. Fact is that the earlier integration starts the easier the disabled get accustomed to it.
3.) I can contribute a daily personal experience when driving by bus to my school. A blind girl is rarely helped by other pupils. I offer her my seat whenever I meet her. But there are also people who don't help her.
4.) The biggest problem is self acceptance of a handicap. The enviroment is not ready to give special understanding and support that would urgently needed.
Bitte diesen Absatz korrigieren.Das sind die ersten 4 Fragen die wir gestern ausgearbeitet haben.
Where can a handicapped person get help ? - Specially written for Conny
What benefits can I claim?
Income-related benefits
If you are on a low income, you may be able to claim:
* income support
* housing benefit
* council tax benefit
* tax credits.
Additional support is available through these benefits for disabled people.
Disability benefits
Disability benefits are not means-tested, which means your entitlement isn't affected by how much money you have. Instead, the amount of benefit you receive will depend on how severe your disability is.
* If you need help with day-to-day tasks because of a mental illness or physical disability, you may be able to get disability living allowance (if you're under 65) or attendance allowance (if you're 65 and over).
* If you can't work because you are disabled, you may be able to claim incapacity benefit.
* If you've been injured in an accident at work, you may be entitled to industrial injuries disablement benefit and constant attendance allowance.
* If you were injured and disabled while serving in the army, you may be entitled to war disablement pension and constant attendance allowance.
Help for carers
If you have a carer, they may be able to claim carer's allowance. You can find out more about financial help for carers here.
Help from the social fund
You may also be able to get a community care grant, a budgeting loan or a crisis loan from the social fund to help you set up home.
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Where can I get help with benefits?
Working out which benefits you can claim can be complicated - and filling in the forms can be worse! So it's a good idea to get some help from a Citizens Advice Bureau, welfare rights agency or a disability advice service. Use Update or the Advice Services Directory to find an agency near you.
An adviser can help you:
* find out what you're entitled to
* fill in the forms
* sort out any problems with your benefits.
You can also call the Benefit Enquiry Line on 0800 882 200 for help with filling in benefit forms. If you are deaf or have a hearing impairment you can use the minicom line on 0800 24 33 55.
Back to top
What other financial support is available for disabled people?
You may be able to get help to pay for housing support and other care costs, including self-directed support (direct payments), so you can arrange and pay for your own care services. The section on paying for support has more information.
In addition, depending on your situation, you may be entitled to additional financial support, such as:
* support from the independent living fund
* council tax discounts
* help to pay for adaptations
* help with heating bills
* free NHS prescriptions, dental care and hospital travel costs
* blind person's tax allowance and television licence discount
* discounts on public transport, hiring or buying a car and parking
* car tax exemption.
Income-related benefits
If you are on a low income, you may be able to claim:
* income support
* housing benefit
* council tax benefit
* tax credits.
Additional support is available through these benefits for disabled people.
Disability benefits
Disability benefits are not means-tested, which means your entitlement isn't affected by how much money you have. Instead, the amount of benefit you receive will depend on how severe your disability is.
* If you need help with day-to-day tasks because of a mental illness or physical disability, you may be able to get disability living allowance (if you're under 65) or attendance allowance (if you're 65 and over).
* If you can't work because you are disabled, you may be able to claim incapacity benefit.
* If you've been injured in an accident at work, you may be entitled to industrial injuries disablement benefit and constant attendance allowance.
* If you were injured and disabled while serving in the army, you may be entitled to war disablement pension and constant attendance allowance.
Help for carers
If you have a carer, they may be able to claim carer's allowance. You can find out more about financial help for carers here.
Help from the social fund
You may also be able to get a community care grant, a budgeting loan or a crisis loan from the social fund to help you set up home.
Back to top
Where can I get help with benefits?
Working out which benefits you can claim can be complicated - and filling in the forms can be worse! So it's a good idea to get some help from a Citizens Advice Bureau, welfare rights agency or a disability advice service. Use Update or the Advice Services Directory to find an agency near you.
An adviser can help you:
* find out what you're entitled to
* fill in the forms
* sort out any problems with your benefits.
You can also call the Benefit Enquiry Line on 0800 882 200 for help with filling in benefit forms. If you are deaf or have a hearing impairment you can use the minicom line on 0800 24 33 55.
Back to top
What other financial support is available for disabled people?
You may be able to get help to pay for housing support and other care costs, including self-directed support (direct payments), so you can arrange and pay for your own care services. The section on paying for support has more information.
In addition, depending on your situation, you may be entitled to additional financial support, such as:
* support from the independent living fund
* council tax discounts
* help to pay for adaptations
* help with heating bills
* free NHS prescriptions, dental care and hospital travel costs
* blind person's tax allowance and television licence discount
* discounts on public transport, hiring or buying a car and parking
* car tax exemption.
Freitag, 4. April 2008
Handicapped people
A day of a blind girl
Today I got up at 7 o' clock and it was very strange. My room was very dark and couldn't see anything. I put the light on but it was the same darkness in my room. I was wondering and tried to go into the bathroom. There a had a shower and I washed ma face. It was so dark that I ran against a chair. Then I was looking for may clothes but I couldn't ´see it. I found a T-shirt but i didn't know which and what colour.
Fortsetzung gibt es morgen!
Bitte korregieren.
Today I got up at 7 o' clock and it was very strange. My room was very dark and couldn't see anything. I put the light on but it was the same darkness in my room. I was wondering and tried to go into the bathroom. There a had a shower and I washed ma face. It was so dark that I ran against a chair. Then I was looking for may clothes but I couldn't ´see it. I found a T-shirt but i didn't know which and what colour.
Fortsetzung gibt es morgen!
Bitte korregieren.
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